Tuesday 2 October 2012

Treatment

Me and Josh have decided to create a short film about a boy, aged 16-18 who one day wakes up and is invisible. There's no reason why, or how, he just is. However, he does not realise this and goes about his normal day. Firstly, he gets dressed, brushes his teeth, brushes his hair and goes down to breakfast, where his mum is rushing to get ready. He tries to speak to her but shes rushes past him without a word, so he continues with getting ready and eats his cereal slightly confused about the offhanded greeting from his mum.

Our character, Aaron, then gets on the bus, and arrives at school, where his friends are in a group outside. He joins them and they ignore him. Hes confused why and spends the journey to the lesson play fighting and joking so they pay attention to him. They don't. In the lesson, the teacher calls out the register and when hes marked as absent on the register he realises hes invisible and then starts messing around.

Prank one: he then takes the white board pen and starts doodling on the whiteboard. the teacher thinks there is something wrong with the computer and coincidently deletes the work.
Prank 2: He goes into the girls toilet and listens to girls conversation.. ????
Prank 2: He (josh make it up idk any other ideas)
Prank 3: After school steals from a shop
Prank 4: Eats a childs cheese burger in mcdonalds.. child is confused and mother comments on how hungry he is.
Prank 5; final: gropes a girls boobs and then becomes visible
After this he gets slapped across the face, and a look of shock passes his face and then credits.

1 comment:

  1. Good start. This is brief but workable. As you know we need a storyboard to work on today as well so I hope you bring it.

    Target Grade A3 (low A)
    Current working level D2 (middle D)

    Therefore a lot to do to improve.

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